[discuss] Summary of comments - NETmundial secretariat

Tue Apr 22 19:11:15 UTC 2014

Hmm....maybe not all the critical afterall ;)

>
> *Internet surveillance *–
> Mass and arbitrary surveillance undermines trust in the Internet and trust
> in the Internet governance ecosystem. Surveillance of communications, their
> interception, and the collection of personal data, including mass
> surveillance, interception and collection should be conducted in accordance
> with states’ obligations under international human rights law. More
> dialogue is needed on this topic at the international level using forums
> like IGF and the Human Rights Council aiming to develop a common
> understanding on all the related aspects.
>

> *Comments on this paragraph: 32*
> Edit proposals with rationale
> *GOVERNMENT:*
> recommends deleting “including mass surveillance” in the second sentence
> *Rationale:*
> As there is no reference to “mass surveillance” in international human
> rights laws, the UK government recommends deleting “including mass
> surveillance” in the second sentence (fourth line). We believe that the
> sense of the text would not be impaired by this deletion.
>

Cheers!

On Tue, Apr 22, 2014 at 7:38 PM, Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>wrote:

> Hello Adam,
>
> Thanks for sharing this, good to see some critical rationale featured!
> Looking forward to the final document!
>
> Regards
>
>
> On Tue, Apr 22, 2014 at 7:19 PM, Adam Peake <ajp at glocom.ac.jp> wrote:
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>> http://netmundial.br/blog/2014/04/22/final-report-on-comments-of-the-draft-outcome-document-is-available/
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>> The secretariat has produced a summary of comments. <
>> http://netmundial.br/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/NETmundialPublicConsultation-FinalReport20140421.pdf
>> >
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>> Final report on comments of the Draft Outcome Document is available
>>
>> W3Chttp://
>> netmundial.br/blog/2014/04/22/final-report-on-comments-of-the-draft-outcome-document-is-available/April22, 2014
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>> NETmundial Executive Secretariat consolidated 1.370 comments received,
>> between April 15th and 21st, in one single report that now is available for
>> public consultation. The total of these remarks were shared in Introduction
>> (40), Principles (832) and Roapmap (498).
>>
>> During seven days, commenters were invited to provide their name, their
>> preferred email address and the sector to which they thought they belonged
>> to in the capacity of commenting. NETmundial used no validation system to
>> verify the identity of the commenter. This report and, most importantly,
>> the comments themselves, should be read in light of this information.
>>
>> The comment system was locked down on 12:00pm UTC. After that,
>> NETmundial’s Data Team took the final snapshot of the database with all the
>> comments and their relevant information and produced the summary report,
>> available in .pdf format for download through the link below.
>>
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