[discuss] [Marcocivil] RES: NetMundial Draft Outcome document Online for comments at the platform

[Carlos A. Afonso]

Hi Chip, thanks for your comments. It is very important that your
comments be inserted in the comment area of the NETmundial portal
(deadline April 21st) so we can try and improve the language to clarify.

Please recall that the doc represents an effort to build consensus from
more than 187 contributions and on some topics this was quite complex,
as you can imagine.

fraternal regards

--c.a.

On 04/16/2014 11:22 PM, Chip Sharp (chsharp) wrote:
> Dear Carlos,
> 
> I appreciate your clarification as a member of the EMC that these two paragraphs are about Network Neutrality. The second sentence is especially difficult to parse (at least in English).
> 
> Thanks,
> Chip
> 
> 
> On Apr 14, 2014, at 9:08 PM, Carlos A. Afonso <ca at cafonso.ca> wrote:
> 
>> Laura, I think you did not read the docs in detail:
>>
>> "Internet should continue to be a globally coherent, interconnected,
>> stable, unfragmented, scalable and accessible network-of-networks, based
>> on a common set of unique identifiers and that allows the free flow of
>> data packets/information."
>>
>> and:
>>
>> "The Internet should be preserved as a fertile and innovative
>> environment based on an open system architecture, with voluntary
>> collaboration, collective stewardship and participation, recognizing
>> technical management principles for efficient and improved network
>> operation and preserving the end-to-end nature of the network,  equal
>> technical treatment of all protocols and data, delivered by the
>> underlying communications and seeking to resolve technical issues at a
>> level closest to their origin."
>>
>> --c.a.
>>
>> On 04/14/2014 09:59 PM, Laura Tresca wrote:
>>> Wow, net neutrality is NOT pointed out as a principle!
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>>> FYI: http://document.netmundial.br/introduction/
>>>
>>> Please, engage with your comments or rating the paragraphs you support.
>>>
>>> Sorry for cross-posting. It would be good if we channel short and concise comments in that platform.
>>>
>>> Enjoy!
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