[discuss] [ciresearchers] NETmundial documents online for comment

Fri Apr 18 12:08:22 UTC 2014

Thanks for this Adam and for pointing to the opportunity for making
comments.

And I have several comments.  However, given how the comments element for
the document is structured I don't see how I can usefully introduce them
into that format since I want to comment not on what is in the document; but
rather on what isn't in the document.

In that context I see two notable and even astonishing absences.

1.       The document as presented refers to
stakeholders/multistakeholderism in its discussions of the global Internet
governance model in one form or another 46 times! While on the other hand,
the document contains no, and let me repeat, NO references to democracy or
democratic governance!  

Clearly there is an intent to replace democratic governance with
multistakeholder governance. But this issue is not addressed in a forthright
manner anywhere in the document. 

2.       The document nowhere identifies an overall objective for the
governance it is discussing. That is, for what purpose or to what end are
the governance structures/models being directed? 

To put it bluntly is the proposed governance of the Internet being
undertaken in support of the "public interest" or in the interests of the
individual "stakeholders" among whom of course certain private corporate and
national interests/stakes are pre-eminent? Given what is identified in item
#1 the answer to this second question would appear to be self-evident.

Of course, these issues were not addressed by myself or others in the 188
position papers presented to the NetMundial conference.  Thus one could
perversely argue that their absence in the Outcome Statement is a reflection
of the failure by contributors to argue for their inclusion.  

However, the perversity of this argument is obvious when one asks the
question, is democratic governance in the public interest not something that
can be assumed, taken as a given in an area as significant, whose influence
is so pervasive, as the Internet. Need one even argue that the governance of
the Internet must occur within a democratic framework and directed in
support of the public interest. 

Who could possibly have imagined that this conference dealing with global
(Internet) governance would, completely replace the 1000 year evolution of
democratic governance in support of the public interest and replace this
with governance by and for "stakeholders" acting in pursuit of their
individual and private interests. 

Given, as I mentioned, that I see no way of introducing these comments into
the commentary section on the document it would be appreciated if you would
yourself, forward these to the relevant NetMundial authorities for
consideration as they are preparing their final drafts of the output
statement for the meeting.

Sincerely,

Michael Gurstein  

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Please see < <http://document.netmundial.br/>
http://document.netmundial.br/> Use the Navigate button.  Information below.

Comments will close April 21th, 12:00 UTC.

Adam

WELCOME TO NETMUNDIAL PUBLIC COMMENTS PAGE

After an open call for content contribution, NETmundial - the Global
Multistakeholder Meeting on the Future of Internet Governance - received 188
documents from 46 different countries. These documents were sent by
representatives of Civil Society, Private Sector, Academy, Governments and
Technical Community.

Based on these broad set of inputs, NETmundial's Executive Multistakeholder
Committee (EMC) prepared a Draft Outcome Document and submitted it for
consultation with NETmundial's High-level Multistakeholder Committee (HLMC)
on April 3rd, 2014. After incorporating the inputs from the HLMC, under the
guidance of NETmundial's Chair and Co-Chairs, a final version of the
document is released here for public comments. The public consultation will
be open for comments on NETmundial's Executive Committee Output Document
from April 14th until April 21th, 12:00 UTC.

For this public consultation a commenting tool is available online at
<http://document.netmundial.br/> http://document.netmundial.br/ with the
purpose of receiving public comments on specific points of the document. It
is not necessary to create an account in order to post your comment to the
document. You'll be able to immediately start reading the document and
whenever you have something to say, you'll just have to provide a full name
and contact email address alongside your comment.

By clicking on any paragraph of the document, you'll be able to see all the
comments other people have already made pertaining to that portion of the
text; as referred above, you are also granted the possibility  to register
your own observations. Maybe your concern was already addressed in someone
else's comment, so please be sure to take a look at the previous comments
before making yours.

This public consultation closes the loop that started by collecting public
content contributions. Such contributions were compiled and merged into the
Outcome Document by the NETmundial EMC and HLMC committees in the spirit of
trying to represent the overall context of the current Internet Governance
debate. It is very important to receive further public input in this final
stage, so that the outcome is true to the issues and concerns presented by
all stakeholders.

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