<div dir="ltr"><div>Hmm....maybe not all the critical afterall ;)<br><br><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex" class="gmail_quote"><br><b>Internet surveillance<br>
</b>–<br>Mass and arbitrary surveillance undermines trust in the Internet and trust in the Internet governance ecosystem. Surveillance of communications, their interception, and the collection of personal data, including mass surveillance, interception and collection should be conducted in accordance with states’ obligations under international human rights law. More dialogue is needed on this topic at the international level using forums like IGF and the Human Rights Council aiming to develop a common understanding on all the related aspects.<br>
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<b>GOVERNMENT:</b><br>
recommends deleting “including mass surveillance” in the second sentence<br><b>Rationale:</b><br>As there is no reference to “mass surveillance” in international human rights laws, the UK government recommends deleting “including mass surveillance” in the second sentence (fourth line). We believe that the sense of the text would not be impaired by this deletion.<br>
</blockquote><br></div>Cheers!<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Apr 22, 2014 at 7:38 PM, Seun Ojedeji <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:seun.ojedeji@gmail.com" target="_blank">seun.ojedeji@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div><div>Hello Adam,<br><br></div>Thanks for sharing this, good to see some critical rationale featured! Looking forward to the final document!<br>
<br></div>Regards<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><div class="h5"><br><br>
<div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Apr 22, 2014 at 7:19 PM, Adam Peake <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:ajp@glocom.ac.jp" target="_blank">ajp@glocom.ac.jp</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<i><span style="color:rgb(0,102,0)">Seun Ojedeji,<br style="color:rgb(0,102,0)"></span><span style="color:rgb(0,102,0)">Federal University Oye-Ekiti<br style="color:rgb(0,102,0)"></span><span style="color:rgb(0,102,0)">web: </span><a href="http://www.fuoye.edu.ng" target="_blank">http://www.fuoye.edu.ng</a><br>
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