[discuss] [At-Large] Updated : Statement to present at World Internet Conference @ Wuzhen

[Sivasubramanian M]

>
> "We, the undersigned, sincerely invite the leaders of the Chinese
> Internet Community to recognize the following generally acceptable Internet
> principles as a base upon which to build for the Internet in China:"


​" ... upon which to build [ or "futher evole" ] the GLOBAL Internet "​

​ might sound better.
​

Sivasubramanian M <https://www.facebook.com/sivasubramanian.muthusamy>

On Mon, Nov 17, 2014 at 3:57 PM, Vint Cerf <vint at google.com> wrote:

> works for me.
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> On Mon, Nov 17, 2014 at 2:14 AM, James Seng <james.seng at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Dear all,
> >
> > Here is the updated Statement that we intends to release at the WIC @
> > Wuzhen.
> >
> > In view of the latest statement of Netmundial Initiatives by "I"STAR as
> > well as some other comments, we have modify the original statement that
> > reference NETmundial statement to the following:
> >
> > "We, the undersigned, sincerely invite the leaders of the Chinese
> > Internet Community to recognize the following generally acceptable
> Internet
> > principles as a base upon which to build for the Internet in China:"
> >
> > I understand there is a differences between NETmundial statement in April
> > 2014 and the current NETmundial Initiatives but that might easily
> confused
> > by someone who is not familiar with the events.
> >
> > There are some minor grammar and typo edits.
> >
> > For those who has signed, please also let me know if your name is
> > represented correctly.
> >
> > Thank you for your support!
> >
> > --
> > -James Seng
> >
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