[discuss] [At-Large] Updated : Statement to present at World Internet Conference @ Wuzhen

[James Seng]

Thanks for the suggestion but that would change the purpose of the letter
totally.

"We, the undersigned, sincerely invite the leaders of the Chinese Internet
Community to recognize the following generally acceptable Internet
principles as a base upon which to build for the Internet in China:"

is precisely what we intended;

Internet in China should follow generally acceptable Internet principles.

-James Seng

On Mon, Nov 17, 2014 at 6:44 PM, Sivasubramanian M <isolatedn at gmail.com>
wrote:

> "We, the undersigned, sincerely invite the leaders of the Chinese
>> Internet Community to recognize the following generally acceptable Internet
>> principles as a base upon which to build for the Internet in China:"
>
>
> ​" ... upon which to build [ or "futher evole" ] the GLOBAL Internet "​
>
> ​ might sound better.
> ​
>
> Sivasubramanian M <https://www.facebook.com/sivasubramanian.muthusamy>
>
> On Mon, Nov 17, 2014 at 3:57 PM, Vint Cerf <vint at google.com> wrote:
>
>> works for me.
>>
>> v
>>
>>
>> On Mon, Nov 17, 2014 at 2:14 AM, James Seng <james.seng at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> > Dear all,
>> >
>> > Here is the updated Statement that we intends to release at the WIC @
>> > Wuzhen.
>> >
>> > In view of the latest statement of Netmundial Initiatives by "I"STAR as
>> > well as some other comments, we have modify the original statement that
>> > reference NETmundial statement to the following:
>> >
>> > "We, the undersigned, sincerely invite the leaders of the Chinese
>> > Internet Community to recognize the following generally acceptable
>> Internet
>> > principles as a base upon which to build for the Internet in China:"
>> >
>> > I understand there is a differences between NETmundial statement in
>> April
>> > 2014 and the current NETmundial Initiatives but that might easily
>> confused
>> > by someone who is not familiar with the events.
>> >
>> > There are some minor grammar and typo edits.
>> >
>> > For those who has signed, please also let me know if your name is
>> > represented correctly.
>> >
>> > Thank you for your support!
>> >
>> > --
>> > -James Seng
>> >
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-James Seng
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