[discuss] Final draft of the IGF Mandate recommendation statement

[Stephanie Perrin]

This is very helpful Niels, will do.
Cheers Stephanie
On 2014-09-03, 16:56, Niels ten Oever wrote:
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> Really great work, thanks a lot for drafting this in these busy days.
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> Some small suggestions:
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> 1. replace: widespread multi-stakeholder support to broad
> multi-stakeholder support
> 2. replace continuing with prolonged mandate for
> 3. in para two the it sounds a bit like the biggest
> achievement/objective of the IGF is supporting the IGF trust fund
> 4. perhaps a bit more enchanting first sentence? Perhaps along the
> lines of: The internet is here to stay, the same should be true for
> the IGF because multistakeholder dialogue is essential for maintaining
> this crucial tool for freedom of expression, social and economical
> development.
>
> I hope this helps.
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>
> Best,
>
> Niels
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>
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> On 09/03/2014 11:46 PM, Marilyn Cade wrote:
>> YUP. MUCH better 'english'. I also point out a spell check error in
>> 3 bullet/use of 'an' rather than 'and'.It is a small item, but just
>> pointing out. M
>>
>>> Date: Wed, 3 Sep 2014 23:22:56 +0200 From: jeanette at wzb.eu To:
>>> cdel at firsthand.net; stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca CC:
>>> bestbits at lists.bestbits.net; discuss at 1net.org;
>>> governance at lists.igcaucus.org Subject: Re: [discuss] Final draft
>>> of the IGF Mandate recommendation	statement
>>>
>>> Good point! Jeanette
>>>
>>> Am 03.09.14 18:36, schrieb Christian de Larrinaga:
>>>> Replace
>>>>
>>>> In order to allow the IGF to reach its full potential as a
>>>> forum for all stakeholders in Internet Governance, we the
>>>> undersigned participants at the 2014 IGF in Istanbul recommend
>>>> an extension of the its mandate which is open-ended, as soon as
>>>> possible.   This letter will remain open for signature until
>>>> November 1, 2014.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> to
>>>>
>>>> In order to allow the IGF to reach its full potential as a
>>>> forum for all stakeholders in Internet Governance, we the
>>>> undersigned participants of the 2014 IGF recommend that its
>>>> mandate is extended as soon as possible to be open-ended.
>>>>
>>>> This letter will remain open for signature until November 1,
>>>> 2014.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Christian NB I'm not in Istanbul but hopefully still considered
>>>> a participant.
>>>>
>>>> Stephanie Perrin wrote:
>>>>> Attached is the final draft of the statement re extension of
>>>>> the IGF mandate.  We have engaged in many consultations and
>>>>> are optimistic that many different stakeholders will sign on,
>>>>> possibly including countries. Please return any comments to
>>>>> me directly tonight, cc Jeanette Hofmann, and I will manage
>>>>> their input prior to the opening of the document for
>>>>> signature tomorrow morning.  We are looking for a suitable
>>>>> platform to put the document up for signature, suggestions
>>>>> welcome. Thank you all for your help on this, it has been
>>>>> great to work with everyone! Stephanie Perrin and Jeanette
>>>>> Hofmann _______________________________________________
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>>>> -- Christian de Larrinaga FBCS, CITP, MCMA
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